This map seems more like it should be a cool jump map. Some of the lighting is nice, while in other places it seems a bit too dark. The dragon tail thing could be a leet jump spot. You could get replace those long green spikes all over the place with different jumps. I mean you could still have your green spikes, but they could all be lumped together into small pits that a player would not want to fall into. These are just suggestions because I do not see this map as a TDM, perhaps and FFA though, but as a jump map it would be interesting. You are already working with teleporters anyway and that is at least 1/2 the work of making a jump map.